one thing
i dont like the vocals...they sound more like hardstyle vocals to me xD...and it gets kinda boring...just a little bit....but ur the first person i ever seen on this site to attempt a better off alone remix so that gets points :P
also theres no precussion at all, and u can barely hear the kick in some parts of the song. other then that its a really good composition for a first time song :P what do u use?
msg me back :P