i have to say...
this isnt very good...its one of the most annoying things ive ever heard in my life o.o....yeah i would have to say yes...thE most annoying thing ive ever heard in my entire life of making and somewhat producing music...commenting on music...listening to ppl on NG..im not trying to flame...so im going to give u fair criticism
1) your bassline is all waked out...it has no melody...its basicly just u sliding it...in every which way u can...theres no "Meat" there at all..
2) theres no melody period...its a hip hop percussion beat to this lame ass bassline..so fail there aswell
3) you percussion wasnt too great either...ive heard alot of Dub listening to NG artist put theres up and they atleast make it interesting
Im sorry but u really need to rethink this song...delete the flp...and then start all over again because if u want points...your gonna have to do waaaay better then this...
peace easy dude