well
the one thing i realize is that most the entire song follows 1 certain melody...and u dont have much in this song either...i dont mind the elec guitar but not really in a techno song...i like the kick...that was pretty cool actually..
also its a very short song so yeah...
at :40 i thought it was gonna go into some really awesome riff to blow my mind and that kinda let me down when i just heard that starting synth...but all in all...its a nice try...lets hope u change stuff around cuz its interesting :P