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well

the one thing i realize is that most the entire song follows 1 certain melody...and u dont have much in this song either...i dont mind the elec guitar but not really in a techno song...i like the kick...that was pretty cool actually..

also its a very short song so yeah...

at :40 i thought it was gonna go into some really awesome riff to blow my mind and that kinda let me down when i just heard that starting synth...but all in all...its a nice try...lets hope u change stuff around cuz its interesting :P

XFireBassX responds:

tyvm for the possitive feedback. this is just a test and i really appreaciate u giving me something to work on. thank you :D

uhm

the only problem with this song is the offtone notes....well and the mixing of each melody...cuz they are offtone it messes up the song quiet a bit in the beginging...second problem...this isnt techno...this is DnB....so yeah...

i like the guitar in the beginning...that was great the bells were off...a bit anyways...and then u switch it to something that sounded really awsome...btw that other melo u hear with the guitar isnt bad either i just here something out of tune...im really sure its those bells......anyways...nice job (putting it in the wrong catagory didnt lose u stars :P)...keep it up ^^

peace easy

Patronium20 responds:

Thanks for the tips Grimmace. And I switched the categories to D&B like you said. And the bells did sound off.

not bad....not bad at all

i'd have to say....a little bit slow for techno...but you have a nice feel in this song...like a relaxing type feel...twas a nice find...thank you :3

peace easy

yagru responds:

tanks dawg

i have to say...

this isnt very good...its one of the most annoying things ive ever heard in my life o.o....yeah i would have to say yes...thE most annoying thing ive ever heard in my entire life of making and somewhat producing music...commenting on music...listening to ppl on NG..im not trying to flame...so im going to give u fair criticism

1) your bassline is all waked out...it has no melody...its basicly just u sliding it...in every which way u can...theres no "Meat" there at all..

2) theres no melody period...its a hip hop percussion beat to this lame ass bassline..so fail there aswell

3) you percussion wasnt too great either...ive heard alot of Dub listening to NG artist put theres up and they atleast make it interesting

Im sorry but u really need to rethink this song...delete the flp...and then start all over again because if u want points...your gonna have to do waaaay better then this...

peace easy dude

cky12qxz responds:

I see where you're coming from. But m8, this was just a experiment. D:

nice man

this is pretty awsome actually...i like it...keep on making these sick beats and maybe u can start makin moneh xD

lol

nice job...u said this was u on a piano? well great job...i heard a few miss hits but all in all u have alot of talent ^^...so great job :3...

9/10
4/5

this is

freaking awsome...i love it...its not the type of music i actually listen to but this was very professionally well done that i gave u a 5 making ur score PERFECT :3...anyways...keep it up...

peace easy bro

10/10
5/5

DJ-Babokon responds:

You have my eternal gratitude. This exactly the review I wanted. :D

...

instantly downloaded xD...this is awsome...i loved the begining ... it brought me right into the song in like...seconds lol...great work

peace easy bro

BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

very

well done....heardbreak and dipression is the greatest artist muse in all history....the greatest composers and painters created their masterpeices out of heartache, depression, madness, anger...just look and Picasso and his blue era....and i have to say...i dont listen to hardcore very much but this song was very well put together...keep up the great work bro

peace easy

10/10
5/5

not too bad really...

ive never liked progressive trance...but this isnt bad...im thinking about this as a creation not a song really...you got all of the progression really down...its quite a nice listen to it kinda song really...anyways i'd have to say well done sir :3....

anyways peace easy bro

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